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אייל אא

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Pleaes , help me corect any mistakes , should you see one . Thanks !
Hello , I'm Eyal from Israel , I'm 32 years of age , and I have been enjoying your products for many years now . Over the years , I bought ALL the company's products that arrived to Israel , never missed a thing ! I also encountered some difficulties , mistakes and ideas . So .. here are they : (Forgive me for the disorder of the following notes and spelling mistakes) 1 - The 'RushHour' game , is very hard to mobile . The playing cards are nicely tucked inside it's compartment , but the cars and trucks are easy to scatter since the thin clear plastic above them is not massive enough and wares out fast . (Children !!) 2 - With the game 'River Crossing' , you have provided 20 logs . The most number of logs needed in a playing card is 17 or 18 , which means : 2-3 extra logs . That is a very good thing , due to the fact that children (again) are the main players of the game , and they tend to lose small parts .. I'd like to suggest that you would provide extra parts with other games as well , such as : an extra frog with 'Hoppers' or an extra turtle with 'Flip-It' . 3 - In the game 'Lunar Lockout' , card #31 , there's an easier way to solve than the one on the back of the card : B-L , A-DRDL , B-DR , X-UL . It makes the blue robot (E) useless .. 4 - The prices of your products in Israel are fair , I'm glad to say ! But , it takes too long for new products to arrive her :( 5 - About : A - Old products that are no longer menufactured . B - Items that are not to be obteined in Israel . Is there a way of buying them except for On-Line purchase ? I'm too afraid of this method . Any other way is fine . 6 - I'd like to be informed about any upcoming releases of new products . Eyal - Israel I cannot thank you enough for the hours of pure enjoyment your products have given me . Thank you thank you thank you ! :)
 

SummerSpirit

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לא קראתי את כל המכתב ועדיף שאני לא אתקן דברים שאני לא בטוחה בהם אבל בתחילת המכתב כתבת I'm 32 years of age. במכתבים רשמיים (במידה וזהו סוג המכתב) נהוג ל-א לכתוב בקיצור אלה I Am. בנוסף, כותבים I am 32 years OLD ולא Years of age.
 

Dancing mad

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There's nothing wrong with "I am X years of age". It's just more formal than "I am X years old", and is therefore more suitable for a formal letter.​
 

אייל אא

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Thanks
I will change as advised . (I hope this message will be from left to right , or else , tell me how to do it) thanks again
 

Dancing mad

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ilana917

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, I'm Eyal from Israel , I'm 32 years old. and I have been enjoying your products for many years now . Over the years , I bought ALL the company's products that arrived in Israel , I also encountered some difficulties , mistakes and ideas . So .. here they are : (Forgive me for the scattered nature of the following notes) 1 - The 'RushHour' game , is very hard to move . The playing cards are nicely tucked inside their compartment , but the cars and trucks are easily scattered since the thin clear plastic above them is not big enough and wears out fast . (Children !!) 2 - With the game 'River Crossing' , you have provided 20 logs . The most number of logs needed in a playing card is 17 or 18 , which means : 2-3 extra logs . That is a very good thing , due to the fact that children (again) are the main players of the game , and they tend to lose small parts .. I'd like to suggest that you provide extra parts with other games as well , such as : an extra frog with 'Hoppers' or an extra turtle with 'Flip-It' . 3 - In the game 'Lunar Lockout' , card #31 , there is an easier solution than the one you suggested on the back of the card : B-L , A-DRDL , B-DR , X-UL . It makes the blue robot (E) useless .. 4 - The prices of your products in Israel are fair , I'm glad to say ! But , it takes too long for new products to arrive here :( 5 - About : A - Old products that are no longer manufactured . B - Items that are not available in Israel . Is there a way of buying them aside from On-Line purchase ? I'm too afraid of this method . Any other way is fine . 6 - I'd like to be informed about any upcoming releases of new products . Eyal - Israel I cannot thank you enough for the hours of pure enjoyment your products have given me . Thank you thank you thank you !
 

אייל אא

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