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dizy

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האם
מישהו יכול לבדוק לי את החיבור שלי
אני ממש מודה מראש לכל מי שעוזר ממש ממש
הנושא של החיבור הוא לכתוב לעיתון של בית הספר איזה נושאים צריך ללמד בבית הספר, להדגים ולהסביר את הרעיון. החיבור הוא ככה
With such a large range of subjects in the educate system, there are a different attitude in schooling like: traditional and religion attitude, the science attitude and ethical attitude. I think to be a successful school; the schools have to teach to the all of the attitudes. In our Israeli Jews schools, our school must teach bible and Torah, to teach about Israel history and about the Israel tradition, all the students have to know about the holocaust, Israel’s war and about the populations in Israel. Furthermore In the modern world and in a technology epoch the students have to learn sciences subjects like: physics, chemistry, biology and math, to learn about the history of the scientists and their experiments. The schools should teach three languages: English, Hebrew and Arabic, the entire student in Israel should know to speak and to write all this three languages, because in our country there are a lot of populations like Arabs and stranger peoples, to understand there we have and they have to speak a common language. For example in my school they have added to their list of obligation subjects: Arabic and extra history of Israel.​
רבה לכל מי שעוזר.... ויש לי שאלה, החיבור הזה בן 200 מילים והם ביקשו 140 אז להוריד? זה מזיק אם כותבים יותר מדי?? תודה רבה שוב!
 

koby222

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דבר ראשון אם כתבת יותר ממה שצריך זה לא מזיק...אבל אין טעם לכתוב יותר מידי מה שתיקנתי לך יהיה באותיות גדולות... With such a large range of subjects in the educatTION system, there are a different attitudeS in schooling SUCH AS: traditional and religion attitude, the science attitude and ethical attitude. IN ORDER to be a successful school; the schools have to teach all of the attitudes. In our Israeli JewISH schools, our school must teach bible and Torah, AND IN ADDITION teach about Israel history and about the Israel traditionS, all the students have to know about the holocaust, Israel’s war and about the populations in Israel. Furthermore In the modern world and in a technology epoch the students have to learn sciences subjects like: physics, chemistry, biology and math, to learn about the history of the scientists and their experiments. The schools should teach three languages: English, Hebrew and Arabic, the entire student in Israel should know to speak and to write all this three languages, because in our country there are a lot of populations like Arabs and stranger peoples, to understand there we have and they have to speak a common language. For example in my school they have added to their list of obligation subjects: Arabic and extra history of Israel.
 

ToMeR Yea Yea

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עשיתיועברתי על כל כללי החיבור
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koby222

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נושא קצת מסובך מידי... ועדיין לא מושלם עם התיקונים הקטנים שלי.....אבל גם לא רע. אני הייתי נותן לחיבור כזה 70 מתוך 100
 
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