עזרה

[poli 55]

עזרה

אני צריכה שמישהו יבדוק לי מכתב באנגלית להגשה המכתב : Dear grandmother I'm really sorry that I can't come to your birthday party in Monday so I tell you happy birthday now!! .now I'm in home practice my things because I'm going to north for a big running compotation, this is a very important compotation and my coach told me that I can't miss this race. I hope I will win in the compotation. But I'm very sorry that I will miss your birthday party. And I'm looking forward to seeing you soon…. And again happy birthday to you!!

 

[Peace 0n Earth]

המממ

Dear grandmother I'm really sorry that I won't be able to come to your birthday party on Monday so I'll [

] tell you happy birthday now!!. now I'm at home practicing/ get my thing ready (depends on your intention) because I'm going north for a big running competition, this is a very important competition and my coach has told me that I mustn't (it's better,isn't it?) miss this race. I hope I will win in the competition. But I'm very sorry that I will miss your birthday party. And I'm looking forward to see you soon…. And again happy birthday to you!!​

שמישהו יעבור על זה שוב....

 

[snooPPiT]

אמממ....

לא אומרים : I'm looking forward to seeING you soon…. ?

 

[Peace 0n Earth]

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[poli 55]

חחח

דווקא את זה המורה שלי אמרה לכיתה שככה צריך לכתוב

 

[Peace 0n Earth]

אני אף פעם לא התשמשתי

עם look forward בגלל זה לא ידעתי.

עכשיו אני יודע

 

[poli 55]

תודה

אוקי תודה רבה על העזרה רק שאלה אז זה seeing אוsee?

 

[Peace 0n Earth]

seeing

 

[snooPPiT]

נו פרוב P=