מה לא בסדר במשפט :

[אממ1]

מה לא בסדר במשפט :

The bombs that thrown killed about one fourth million people and those who didn’t die got terrible diseases.​

?

 

[Moonshadow Rogue]

The answer is:

Behind curtain Number three: The word "Were" is missing before the word "Thrown" - It should be written like this: "The bombs that were thrown..." By the way, I suppose you're talking about the Nukes on Hiroshima and Nagasaki? (Being familiar with the results, it strikes me as that)​

 

[snooPPiT]

עוד משהו

אי אפשר להגיד one fourth million people מה הייתה הכוונה ?

 

[Moonshadow Rogue]

A quarter million

 

[גיל14]

One fourth of a million...?

 

[snooPPiT]

למה להגיד אחד חלקי ארבע,

כשאפשר להגיד רבע ? אבל כן, קביל.

 

[לעתניאל ולמלך]

quarter of a million

 

[אממ1]

הנה כל הקטע:

In the early forties, the atomic bomb was invented by American scientists, and first detonated in the desert of New Mexico at a site named Trinity. Towards the end of World War Two, the Americans wanted to finish the war as fast as possible. Truman, The president, decided to drop the atomic bomb on two Japanese cities: Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The bombs that were thrown killed about one fourth of a million people and those who didn’t die got terrible diseases. In addition, many buildings destroyed. As a result, Japan surrendered to America and in continuation the war was over.​

 

[snooPPiT]

שני דברים,

In addition, many buildings were/got destroyed. מכיוון שזה סביל, ובצורה הקודמת של המשפט טענת שהרבה בניינים הרסו. As a result, Japan surrendered to America, and the world was over forthwith.​

שבת שלום

 

[snooPPiT]

world = war

 

[אממ1]

אוקי, תדה רבה

הקטע של "those who didnt die" בסדר? מבחינת הזמנים כן

 

[noah000]

הערה קטנה

סליחה שאני נדחפת... אני הייתי משנה מ- GOT terrible diseases ל- DEVELOPED terrible diseases. פשוט פועל יותר ספציפי ופחות "מדובר" שיתאים יותר לטקסט מהסוג הזה. בלי קשר לזמן (שהוא בסדר).