הערכת חיבור

[elgu1]

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ניתבקשתי ליכתוב חיבור על נושא העיתון אז והיום האם העתונים עדיין באותה פורמה? האנגלית שלי ממש גרועה נא לא ליקטול לתת הערות בעדינות תודה......ממתין להערות אני יודע שיש לי בעיה באנגלית תודה לכם אלגו. Composition In our days developnent technology it"s very past. between inventions andinstrument have a madia including the newspapers.....that the newspapers cach a small part in live of persons or all population on the world not like the past.............................way?the have reasons......first the T.V-in the past the population wewe bought a newspapers and have been reading to interested with spend time. but in present the people moreand more have sit at home and see by cable T.V becuse..........you can see the news live from all the world and you have a many programs what do you like exmple:if you like football you can see it"s a live or if you like to cooking can you see how to coking.in the T.V have a compotion between the programs and the winner is the costomer. the people sit near the T.Vand eat doing what the want . the T.V the pictures moves it"s more intereting......you can push the button sit and wathing the program what you like it"s confortable .SECOND-the radio......in the past on the world the popultion it were very small but now it grow and the results are in the world many cars ....and more offices thay includet radio radio and all the day thay listen whin thay go home going to see T.V. THIRD -the computer the people can spend time and reading a live one by one ....thay can see news too ........In finely my opinion is that the newspapersare going no"t to all the people but going to some of them a small part in the populetion...... i preper to reading but you know the society is push.

 

[Peace 0n Earth]

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nowadays, the technology develops very fast. the media, which includes the television, radio and the newspaper, is one of the most impotant innovation. recently, the newspapers part in the media grows smaller. there's several reasons to this phenomenon. First, the TV. in the past, the newspaper was the only mean of people to be updated in what happens in the world and inside the country as well. however, currently, people can be updated in a short period of time instead of spending a lot of time reading the newspaper. moreover, the TV . the people sit near the T.Vand eat doing what the want . in the T.V, you can watch video scene, which is much more interesting than see a photograph in the newspaper. the pictures moves it"s more intereting. Second,-the radio......in the past on the world the popultion it were very small but now it grow and the results are in the world many cars ....and more offices thay includet radio radio and all the day thay listen whin thay go home going to see T.V. THIRD -the computer the people can spend time and reading a live one by one ....thay can see news too ........In finely my opinion is that the newspapersare going no"t to all the people but going to some of them a small part in the populetion...... i preper to reading but you know the society is push אני הולך לאכול וימשיך......

 

[Peace 0n Earth]

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אם אתה תוהה למה מחקתי את כל הקטע עם הכדורגל והבישול, אז זה בגלל שהתרחקת יותר מידי מהנושא של החיבור שלך..

 

[Peace 0n Earth]

ההמשך..

Nowadays, the technology develops very fast. The media, which includes the television, radio and the newspaper, is one of the most impotant innovation. Recently, the newspapers' part in the media grows smaller. There are several reasons to this phenomenon. First, the TV. In the past, the newspaper was the only mean of people to be updated in what happens in the world and inside the country as well. However, currently, people can be updated in a short period of time instead of spending a lot of time reading the newspaper. Moreover, on the TV, you can watch video scene, which is much more interesting than see a photograph in the newspaper. Secondly , the radio. Formerly, the radios wasn't so common, but today, radios set are found everywhere, in cars, in offices etc. the advantage of the radio, is that the listener doesn't have to sit in front of the set, so that he's able to do two actions simultaneously. finally, in my opinion, there are somepeople who read the newspapers, but not all. ? i prefer reading but you know the society is push?