I need a little help

[Crazy Girl2000]

I need a little help

אני צריכה שתבדקו את הדקדוק בשיר הבא: I remember in the sandbox we always ran around up down,up down until the night is come You were like my brother We always been together Every where I went I knew I met you there I thought you just a friend But I changed my mind when you show up on my dream Tonight... I dont have the courage to tell you what I feel THe only thing i know- Its real... I dont know if you feel the same but without you Im just a lame. מי שלא הבין אז ב-3 בתים הראשונים הם משהו שקרה בעבר וה3 האחרים בהווה תודה לכל מי שעוזר

 

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I remember the sandbox Where we always ran around Up down,up down Until the night has come You were like my brother We've always been together Everywhere I went I knew I had met you there I thought you were just a friend But I changed my mind When you showed up In my dream Tonight... I dont have the courage To tell you what I feel The only thing I know is - It's real... I dont know if you feel the same but without you I'm just lame.​

 

[Crazy Girl2000]

Thank you!