hey, i need help please

[עץ האבטיח]

hey, i need help please

hi, i made these really cute business cards for my cakes business i dont know why, i guess i was distracted or something, and i wrote JESSE'S BAKED GOODS - GOOD JUST GONE BETTER now, i think i should have written "good just got better" but ive seen somewhere a phrase using GONE insted of GOT so i thought it made sence. what do u think? is it totally wrong or i can still give those out? thanks!!

 

[Come Alive]

../images/Emo28.gif First of all- Good luck!!!

Really! i mean it! Cake buisness sounds great! what kinda cakes do you make? maybe i'll get me one

Anyway.. About the card.. look, it IS a mistake, though i think it sounds good with GONE too.. sounds.. you know.. kinda.. ethnic, in a way.. and everybody loves slang.. I think it's cool this way, too.. Wait for other opinions, though. And again- good luck!!!

 

[עץ האבטיח]

thanks, but...

i dont want it just to be cute i want it to be cute AND correct, grammer wise. if what i wrote is totally wrong then i wont give away those cards but is, like you said, its sounds like slang, then i dont mind btw, and thanks for asking, its a home-style cakes business no fancy 3 layers 2 liters of cream cakes.. only healthy and simple stuff that make you feel the "homey" taste

 

[Come Alive]

../images/Emo28.gif Sounds good

Maybe i should get me one of those What's the price?​

 

[Emc2]

makes perfect sense and sounds good

 

[עץ האבטיח]

really? are you sure?

because till now ive got bad opinions only. i think that when you use "gone" it mean that something became bad like gone mad but i dont think if you can say gone better..

 

[AnnabeI Lee]

Good has just gotten better...

It's not because "gone" has a bad connotation, but because "to get better" is a coined phrase. That is just how you say it.

 

[עץ האבטיח]

so i got it totally wrong?

and cant use the cards?

 

[eietmo]

IMO

don't use them. to me it just sounds wrong. I mean, it IS understandable, but if you have a business i'd make sure everything is right​