bookreport

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bookreport

כשכותבים על ספר, באיזה זמן משתתמשים? למשל בשאלה:

Where does the story take place? The story takes place at America. It begins at "Pencey Prep". This is Holden's school that is in Agerstown, Pennsylvania. The story ends in New-York when Holden is back at home. Where does the story take place? The story takes place at America. It begins at "Pencey Prep". This is Holden's school that is in Agerstown, Pennsylvania. The story ends in New-York when Holden is back at home.​

זה בזמן הנכון, או שצריך לכתוב בזמן עבר?

 

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מצטערת בטעות העתקתי פעמיים:|

 

[Zenith87]

ככלל

בשאלות כאלה עונים באותו הזמן שנשאלת. השאלה בהווה ולכן גם התשובה בהווה. תיקון: The story takes place *in* America

 

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אוי..

טעות טפשית... כל השאר בסדר?

 

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ובשאלה הזאת:

How does the story begin? The story begins when Holden stands on top of Thomsen Hill next to Pencey and watches the football game with Saxon Hall. He tells about how he failed in four out of five subjects that he carried that year. Therefore, he flunks out from school. It was Saturday night and he was supposed to get back to home at Wednesday. But he just couldn’t wait. He packed all his stuff and went to the train station in his way to New-York.​

 

[Zenith87]

תיקון

How does the story begin? The story begins when Holden stands on top of Thomsen Hill next to Pencey and watches the football game with Saxon Hall. He tells about how he failed four out of five subjects that he *had taken* that year, and as a result, flunked out of school. It was Saturday night and he was supposed to get back to home *on* Wednesday. But he just couldn’t wait. He packed all his stuff and went to the train station *on* his way to New-York.​

 

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אפשר במקום זה

He tells about how he flunks(?) out of school. ככה?

 

[Zenith87]

תלוי מתי זה קרה

אם כל הסיפור כבר הסתיים לפני שהוא דיבר איתם - He had flunked out of school אם בערך בזמן שהוא מדבר איתם הוא בתהליך של היכשלות (לאו דווקא באותו הרגע, אלא באותו החודש, נגיד)- He's flunking out of school