פאנפיק : A Deathday to remember

פאנפיק : A Deathday to remember

שם הפיק: A deathday to remember for Sir Nicholas תקופת זמן: אין זמן מוגדר, אולי בשנה רביעית דירוג: PG13 תקציר: שימו לב מה קורה בליל כל הקדושים כששיקוי שרון מכין משתבש ומוביל לתוצאות בלתי צפויות.
 
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It was the week Before Halloween, and Harry Potter was sitting in the Gryffindor common Room along with his two best friends - Ron Weasly and Hermione Granger. Hermione made them revise their potions material for a killer exam Proffesor Snape promised to give the class the next lesson, or in his direct words "Be prepeared for the worst exam you'll have to take, marks will be 50 percent of your final grade". Ron threw his quill in frustration. "I don't get it" he said, "why is he doing that? we should be at zonko's with Fred and George buying jokes for halloween!" Harry leaned at his chair. "maybe he hates halloween or something..." Hermione stared at both of them. "could you concentrate? if we don't pass this we fail the whole year! I'm going to bring 'Potions for experts' from the library. wait here". Harry and Ron took their books to their hands. "what do you get if you mix spider legs and Phoenix powder?" wondered Harry. "let it go", said Ron, "Snape probably won't ask that". "well I need to go anyway", he said, "Got Quidditch practice" "can I come too?" asked Ron "sure, But Hermione will kill you" "Oh, forget about her", said Ron, "she'll probably be stuck in the library until tomorrow"
 
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"Remove all books and quills from your tables", said Snape in his arrogant tone, "I do not want to see a single piece of unecssary equipment on them". Harry and Ron put away their books and Hermione raised her hand, but as usual, didn't wait for a permission to speak. "Sir, But I thought we were having an exam..." Snape's mouth twiched in a half evil smile. "We are, Miss Granger, Having a Practical exam" he turned to face the class. "D'you hear that Longbottom?" He turned to Neville, "a practical exam. It means you will have to make a potion. I should of course ask you to try not to give your potion to anybody. We wouldn't want students end up losing all their hair or something similar". There was a smirk from Draco Malfoy's direction and Neville turned red and stared at his cauldroun. "You have exactly 30 minutes to make me a Perfect Flying potion" said Snape. "Your ingrediants are: Newt skin, Snake blood, Spider legs, Unicorn hair, Essence of Porcupine, and - Phoenix powder. Begin" Harry looked at the ingrediants and started mixing them. To his right, he could hear Ron begging Hermione to let him see what she was doing. "Pleeaaaase Hermione", he whispered, "it's like you said - if we don't make it through this one we fail the whole year...." "You should have studied instead of going to see the Quidditch practice" whispered Hermione, "Hey, get off!" she turned her back to Ron so he won't be able to see what she does. "Cut it out you two" said Harry, "if Snape hears us whispering..." But it was too late. Proffessor Snape's image immidiatly appeared near them. "well well... Potter, just because you can fly on a broomstick doesn't mean you don't have to make this potion like the rest of us" he said, Malfoy looking very pleased with himself, as he were everytime Snape bullied Harry. "Miss Granger, what ever are you doing? stand up straight!" Hermione turned back. "Mr. Weasly, at the end of the exam you will give your potion to Potter and then we see what happens when you mix Spider legs with Phoneix powder" snape gave them a nasty smile. Harry and Ron stared at each other. "great..." said Harry, "what are the odds?..." It was a total disaster. At the end of the 30 minutes the class looked like Peeves the Poltergeist had just left there. Cauldrouns were on the floor, Spider legs were all over, and the walls were covered in potion as a result of Neville's potion exploding earlier on, which caused several students to rise above the ground unwillingly and stick to the ceiling. Snape had left them there until the end of the class just so Neville would feel bad about himself. Draco malfoy and his huge friends Crabe and Goyle were laughing their heads off and throwing Newt skin at them. "And now to the interesting part of this exam" said Snape after everyone gave him their potions, "Mr Weasly if you would be kind enough to give Potter your potion". Ron's face turned pale. "please sir..." said Hermione. "Quiet Granger, if you don't want me to accidently break your potion" said Snape, and Hermione stared horrified at Harry drinking Ron's potion. He too rose to the ceiling to join the rest of the students there. "Pathetic" murmured Snape and waved his wand. The students stuck to the ceiling fell in a blast to the floor. "I'm so sorry", said Ron after they left the class, "I had no idea what i was doing. If you would have just let me copy yours...." he turned to Hermione who looked at Harry suspiciously. "what?" he asked. "Phoenix powder and Spider legs is a very dangerous combination", she said, "no one knows what its true affect is... I read that one time a wizard accidently mixed it with his tea and his palms turned all green!" "Well I hope you're happy" Ron told her, "come on - let's go get lunch". "can't, I have practice" said Harry, "you go, I'll see you later". He made his way towards Gryffindor tower to get his Firebolt. The castle was nearly empty since most of the students were at the great hall. Harry walked down the hall and suddenly he heared Colin Creevy's voice behind him. He looked back and tried to avoid him, when suddenly he felt an enormous wave of coldness. He had just walked straight into Nearly Headless Nick. "Oh hello sir nicholas" said Harry "Hello Harry, how are you?" "I'm fine, And you? If I am not mistaken it is your deathday tomorrow, right?" "Yes indeed. my 504th" "Well, congretulations, I think..." "I do hope it will be different than the last ones..." pondered Nearly Headless Nick, "Every year I'm hoping to get the thing I most want" "And what would that be? to join the Headless Hunters?" asked Harry. He knew how dissapointed Nick was when they had rejected him on the account that he wan't completly headless. "No no, I gave up on that long ago. the thing I most want is to be human again. even just for a little while... to be able to smell, to taste, to Feel..." he said, and put his hand through the common room fire, before he went out the portrait hole. |סלינק|​
 
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Harry woke up on Halloween morning from a very weird dream. He dreamed that somehow he was flying, but not with a Potion or a Broomstick, he could fly on his own. He flew high above the castle and felt himself lighter and lighter, that he could sware it was real even when he woke up. He found the dormitory empty. He stared at his watch. Nine o'clock already? The whole room was decorated with beautifully carved pumpkins and all sorts of halloween decorations, probably the work of the house elves. A few dancing skeletons were knocking their bones together when they saw him wake up. He rubbed his eyes and went to the crowded common room to find Ron and Hermione sitting on the chairs by the fire, talking. as he went down the stairs he felt the room has gone really quiet. Everyone stared at him. Hermione screamed, and Ron put his hand over his mouth with shock. "what's wrong?" asked Harry, "is it the halloween stuff?" "Ha.. Harry...?" said a very scared Ron, "you... you're..." but he couldn't finish the sentence. Instead he got up to face Harry and waved his hand at Harry's scar. It went straight through Harry's head. for a moment Harry didn't get what was going on, when he suddenly realized. HE HAD TURNED INTO A GHOST!!! "Wicked..." said George weasly. "Am I... DEAD?" he asked after he looked at his very white, very transperant hands. "Harry, we should go and get help" said Hermione, still shaking, "for all we know - you could be..." They hurried through the portrait hole straight to Proffessor McGonagall's office. Ron and Hermione were running and Harry was levitating above them. Students all over were stopping and pointing at the weird scene. 'This isn't all that bad' he thought, 'but how did I get to be like that?' He thought about Moaning Myrtle. Was he going to stay in the school forever, haunting the Gryffindor tower along with Nearly Headless Nick? Hanging around with Peeves and being intimidated by the Bloody Baron? They entered McGonagall's classroom. She stood up and stared shocked at Harry. "Potter! What on Earth...." she said. "I don't know what happened" he said, confused, "I woke up this morning and I was a... a ghost!" Proffessor McGonagall seemed unable to speak. "wait here", she said finally, "I'm going to get the Headmaster".​
 
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Sir Nicholas de Mimsy- Porpongton found himself lying on the floor near the library, surrounded by a bunch of about 30 students who were whispering and looking at him like he had just fell off the moon. "what are you all looking at?" he said, as he got up to his feet and tried to fly away, but he couldn't rise himself from the ground. He tried to walk through the wall beside him but instead he was amazed to find that he couldn't do that either. He just fell backwards and his head was swelling with pain. Pain? He hadn't felt pain since... since he was alive! But how could he be alive? He's dead. He's been dead for the past 504 years.... he looked at his hands. They had a weird colour, and he could feel his legs! He could touch his legs, he was alive again!! He jumped to his feet. "well well, Sir Nicholas" he heared a voice behind him. It was Albus Dumbledore, the Headmaster, accompanied by a very amazed proffessor McGonagall. "life suits you well" said Dumbledore, "if you could come with us, we have somethings to sort our". Nick followed them into proffessor McGonagall's classroom to find the ghost of Harry Potter and his two shocked friends. "Is... Is that?... Harry Potter?" asked Nick. "Nearlly Headless Nick?" said Ron in astonishment. Nick massaged his neck at the point where usually his head was attached to his throat. "Not so headless anymore, I guess" said Hermione. "I'm afraid we had a little accident" said Dumbledore in a bit amused voice, "Spider legs and Phoenix powder I presume?" Harry nodded. " I thought so", said Dumbledore, "Those two combined together can cause very unusual situations..." "sir, am I dead?" asked Harry "no no, you're just swapped bodies... we should be able to sort this right away then Minerva – " he turned to Proffessor McGonagall, "If you could go get Proffessor Snape please, I believe he'll know the right counter potion to fix this" proffessor McGonagall went out the room, still glancing at the odd pair. She came back with Proffessor Snape a couple of minutes later, and he seemed to be very taken aback by the sight of levitating Harry. "Headmaster", he said in a scared voice, "I had no idea it would lead to that" "There there severus" said Dumbledore, "we all know that Spider legs and Phoenix powder are very unexpected. However I believe you would find a way to correct the situation?" "yes yes of course" said Snape, "I know exactly the potion to make. It will be fixed in no time, It will take me about 5 minuted to make it, if you can just wait here I'll go get it" he said and left the room. Harry looked at Nearlly Headless Nick who seemed to be amazed by his new found body. "That scum", whispered Ron as Snape left, "He Knew this would happen, I bet he is laughing his head off and telling the whole Slytherins how he tricked you into becoming a Ghost. Malfoy will have a field day about this!" A couple of minutes later, Snape returned to the room, carrying a tiny bottle with green liquid. "here", he told Nick, "drink this and walk into Potter, this should work". "Hurry up", said Ron, "we need to get to the Halloween feast, I'm starving!" Nearlly Headless Nick stared at Harry with a sad smile. "The feast... what I wouldn't give... oh well, it was good while it lasted" he said, and opened the tiny potion bottle. "Hang on", said Harry, "Sir, Is that okay if we waited a little while longer before we made the switch?" he asked Dumbledore. "I suppose it will be fine...after all - it is your body" said Dumbledore, "we'll go to the feast then. Minerva? Severus?" and with that they went out of the room. "Harry What are you doing?" Asked Hermione "You heared him Sir Nicholas", smiled Harry, "you have a feast to attend to. What are you waiting for?" Nearly Headless Nick looked at him with amazment. "are... are you serious? You're letting me keep the body?" "only for today" smiled Harry, "Happy Deathday Sir Nicholas" "How can I ever thank you?" asked Nick. "Just taste, and feel. You know – like you wanted. Oh – and the Pumpkin Pie is delicious" he winked. Nick almost fell down while running out of the room towards the Great Hall. "You should go too" Harry told Ron and Hermione who looked at him like he went mental. "and where will you be?" asked Ron. "me?", asked Harry in an innocent tone, "I have some buisiness to sort out with Malfoy.... if you would excuse me..." he flew through the wall towards slytherin tower, his laugh eccohing behind him. THE END​
 

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