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lori4

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זה הראשון שלי באנגלית, וכן אני יודעת שיש לי שגיאות דקדוק. אתמול בלילה(לפנות בוקר) נזכרתי בפרק שליאומון מת בו, סתם בלי סיבה מיוחדת למרות שזה אחד הפרקים בגללם היה שווה לסבול את העונה השלישית, התחלתי לכתוב, הפיק מתרחש אחרי "לב אריה" ששלושת המאמנים המרכזים(לי,רוקי וטאקאטו) מספרים על אותו היום. זה ממש קצר.
 

niena

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אחלה פיק! אהבתי את הסיפור של רוקי במיוחד. באמת יפה
 

OFIRB9

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לא יכולה לקרוא מקבצים, בוהו.
 

lori4

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הנה חופית....

Disclaimer: They aren’t mine, but sometimes I wish they were. The Day Leomon Died Lee The Day Leomon Died was a sad day to all of us, we didn't knows what to say, do or feel, it was all mess up. I remember the day Leomon died but I can't remember if Geri cried or when we stop looking at her like we are the one that were to blame on Leomon death, the only thing I remember from the day Leomon died was the look on his face, his last words and most clearly the thought that crossed my mind: he truly had a "Lion Heart" Ruki "The Day Leomon Died", what a stupid title I mean Leomon didn't really die….. you know! he was still alive somewhere on the digital world, OK so we didn't knows that back then when he died but what difference dos it make. Well if you really want to know I guess I should tell you what I remember, basically I remember that all I wanted to do was to ran away, and never look back…… I remember Takato trying to make Geri moved and Renamon saying something abut going after Impmon and….. I remember the silence of the realization that one of the greats Digimons are no longer with us. Sometimes….. I wish that none of this happened.... because of Geri, always Geri. Takato I really don't want to talk about The Day Leomon Died, it still hurt you know…… what I am saying you don't know and this is all My Fault I mean…. I was the only one who got something from Leomon death…. The Only One!! The One And Only!!!........ it's my fault that Geri was so sad and I couldn't help her all I did was..... to look at her in silence… sometimes I couldn't even look, It's MY FAULY….. I'm Sorry Geri….. Please Forgive Me…. I'm Sorry!!!!
 

OFIRB9

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וגם עזר לי ללמוד למתכונת ביום רביעי ^^;
 
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