התייבשתם?!?!

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Boscorelli

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התייבשתם?!?!

טוב ניסיון לעלות את הפורום למרות שאין פרק (עוד ניסיון אחרי מיליונים...) אולי ננסה לדמיין לנו פרק
כן בואו נמציא לנו פרק! יאללה כל אחד יכתוב בין 10 עד 15 שורות לא פחות ולא יותר ומשתמש אחר ימשיך ככה בסדר רנדומלי ואז יצא לנו פרק מספיק ארוך לשבוע הבא לתקופה עד הפרק הבא... מיכל-את מנהלת הפורום אז את מוזמנת להתחיל... אלא אם כן את רוצה שמישהו יחליף אותך...
 
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QsomeoneQ

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בוסקו, תתחיל אתה....

מיכל במילא לא פה... אני אמשיך, אני פשוט לא יודעת איך להתחיל...
 
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mgirl

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אני פה!

ואני מתחילה... פרק פייקואי במיוחד LOL... Scene: Locker room Bosco´s wearing his vest, Faith´s entering the room. Bosco: Hey. Wussup? Faith: (quietly) hey. Bosco looks at Faith and sees the anger and upsession on her face Bosco: What´s with the sour face? Faith: (putting on her uniform) It´s nothing. Bosco: You sure? Faith: Yeah, I´m sure. <CUT> Scene: Carlos and Doc in the bus, Doc´s driving. Central: all 55 units, multiple-injured, 32 West and Lincoln corner. Carlos: Are we taking that? Doc: Yeah Carlos: Boy 55, 32 west and Lincoln corner. Doc´s turning on the sirens. *זה בדיוק 15 שורות... תסלחו לי אם יש שגיאות כתיב...*
 
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QsomeoneQ

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אני ממשיכה לא הרבה כי אני עסוקה ../images/Emo6.gif

Scene: Carlos and Doc arriving to the chrime area *Doc is driving and carlos sits next to him* Carlos: Oh My God! Doc: What? Carlos: look *points on the chrime scene* <CUT> Scene: The chrime area, a lot of officers laying on the floor blliding. Doc: What´s going on here? Calros: i have no idea! *Doc sees a crowd of ppl and goes to cheak whats going on* Doc (to carlos): They say couple of black guys just started shooting on the Police car Carlos: Who was in it? Doc: Bos and Faith​
*סורי על הטעויות הרבות
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Boscorelli

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QQ הפרק שלך מתחיל להישמע מוכר...

אבל אין פה רצץ.... איך הם הגיעו מהלוקר רום לזירת ירי???
 
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mgirl

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חייבת להמשיך

Scene: The crime scene Doc and Carlos are running towards the front gate of the building. Doc: (shouting) Carlos! Come over here! I need you to help me! Camera focuses on Bosco´s Pale and dead-looking face. Carlos runs over. Doc: He has no palse, help me out. 1,2,3... Doc and Carlos are starting CPR. Carlos: Doc, it´s not working! Doc´s not listening, continues CPR. Carlos: Doc, Doc! Listen to me! We can´t save him. Doc continues. Carlos: Doc! (his voice softening) stop... Doc´s stopping. Carlos is giving him a pet on the back and running towards Faith, who fainted with a broken leg. Carlos: (shouting) she´s ok, just a broken leg and a shock. אנשים, השארתי לכם מצב מסובך מאין כמוהו... מצטערת שהרגתי את בוסקו
 
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@יעל@

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אני כועסת! את בוסקו לא הורגים! שני מייד את התסריט! תעשי שדוק מצליח להציל אותו!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! זהו
 
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mgirl

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Ain´t gonna happen!

ואת חושבת שאת כועסת? בוסקו (של הפורום) בטח כועס יותר - הרגע הרגעתי אותו...
 
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QsomeoneQ

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נראה לך שאת תהרגי לי אותו../images/Emo35.gif ../images/Emo26.gif

Scene: The chrime area *Doc stays a min. with bosco holdin his hand cheaking for palse* Carlos (shouting): Doc, just live him, there is nothing you can do! Doc: CARLOS! i think im feeling a palse over here
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) *carlos runs back to Doc* Doc: lets start CPR Calros: Doc your dreaming, he is dead. Doc: im telling you! he had palse! lets start CPR! Calros: but doc.. Doc: just do what im telling you.​
סורי שזה קצר... שאף אחד לא יהרוג לי את בוסקו שלי!!
 
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Boscorelli

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אני ממשיך!

in the scene DOC: centerl from boy 55 3 CENTRAL: boy 553 DOC: Central we need 2 more buses to this location 2 cops seriously damaged CENTERAL: 10-4 CARLOS: Doc what wuth Faith she need to know... DOC: Dob´t do it.... i will do it... CARLOS: ok... but be careful DOC IS GOING TO YOKAS DOC: Faith..... FAITH: Doc??? What happend? Doc?! DOC: Faith it is bosco FAITH: what? what with Bos?! DOC: Faith i´m sorry but he is.... FAITH: Oh my god! no it´s cant be! bosssss! bosco answer me! DOC: faith listen to me he can´t hear you... i;m sorry but he is dead.... FAITH: Oh my god i don´t know what to say.... what i´m going to do.... PUTTING BOSCO IN THE BLACK BODY BAGS DOC: Faith we will take you to the hospital they will take care of you there.... and if u want u can be the one who tell is to his mom.... FAITH: Doc.... Bosco hasn´t have a family.... קצת סיבכתי יותר :)
 
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QsomeoneQ

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no no, u didnt understand!! he is

NOT DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IIIITTTTSSSSSSSS ALLLLLLIIIIIIIIIIIIVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE
 
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mgirl

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amm... QQ...

U do know that you only say ´it´ about animals and objects, right? You see, when Frankenstein was alive, that Dr. shouted ´it´s alive´... that´s how it sounded now, LOL *picturing Bosco looking like Frankenstein*
 
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mgirl

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A bit over-dramatic, I think...

But I´ll still continue: Scene: Faith is walking into Bosco´s mom´s bar and approaching Bosco´s mom. Faith: Hello. Mom: Hey honey, what can I get you? Faith: You mrs. Boscorellly? Mom: (worried) yes... what happened? Faith: My name is Faith Yokas, I´m Maurice´s partner... Mom: (looking very worried) Yes? Faith: Mrs. Boscorelly... Mau.. Your son... Bosco was shot today. (starting to cry) Mom: What? OMG, no, it can´t be! Faith: I´m sorry. <Mom´s Crying, saying ´it can´t be´ over and over again. Faith´s hugging her. Fade out> I guess I got over dramatic too...
 
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mgirl

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QQ?

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