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במסגרת שיקום האנגלית שלי, התבקשתי לכתוב מכתב, ככל העולה על רוחי, והחלטתי לכתוב פנייה מדומה לאוניברסיטת אוקספורד בתור תלמיד מצטיין באנגלית (מטרה שאני בדרך אליה
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במסגרת שיקום האנגלית שלי, התבקשתי לכתוב מכתב, ככל העולה על רוחי, והחלטתי לכתוב פנייה מדומה לאוניברסיטת אוקספורד בתור תלמיד מצטיין באנגלית (מטרה שאני בדרך אליה
To: Oxford University hello to you. me would been like to be join to your university as a very good man in english 
well, although my knowledge can've been too much good to your standart, i'm think i would wanted to be in your's university and been learn like all the other students, although me is more good then them you knowa'm sayin' my experience am great, i'm studied for over 9 years old english, although my parents has have been always says that i's speaked english since i borned. actually the school are about to puting me in "kitat mea" ! well, i're hopes that you will's check good this offer and will be sures that i does suitable for your's university cause me is the most ever good !!! au revoir Alon
well, although my knowledge can've been too much good to your standart, i'm think i would wanted to be in your's university and been learn like all the other students, although me is more good then them you knowa'm sayin' my experience am great, i'm studied for over 9 years old english, although my parents has have been always says that i's speaked english since i borned. actually the school are about to puting me in "kitat mea" ! well, i're hopes that you will's check good this offer and will be sures that i does suitable for your's university cause me is the most ever good !!! au revoir Alon
