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בקשה

מישהו בבקשה יכול לתקן לי את הטעויות שלי (אם יש). תודה.. A day after David Ben Gurion declared the establishment of the jewish state, all the states which surrounded Israel, launched a war against Israel. One of them was Ejypt. The war has been lasting since that day, although two of the states made peace with israel: Jorden and Ejypt. Througout the history, the border with Ejypt was very unsafe. The problem was that Ejypt, like most of the Arabic states, disagreed with the establishment of the jewish state, and tried to do everything to hurt the state in order to destroy it. Two of the wars, YOM KIPUR war and SHESHET HAYAMIM war, were devastating and caused many casualties. Moreover, Some soldiers were captured and brutally tortured. In 1967, during the YOM KIPUR war, Israel occupied some of the Palestinian teritories and a big teritory in Ejypt, Sinai, which was an abandoned region. Israel settled the region with people and started to develpe the area. Although many people could'nt forget and forgive Egypt for what it had done, on March 26, 1979 a peace agreement was signed by the israeli prime minister Menahem Begin and the Egyptian prime minister Anuar Sadat, who was murdered due to this step. Part of the agreement was that israel would return Sinai to Ejypt. Although the relations between the two states, have never been perfect, and there are many people (mainly in Egypt) who oppose this agreement, the peace agreement was an important step in the israeli state and the arbic world's relations.
 

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יש לך טעות באיות של מצריים - Egypt, השמות של המלחמות וכמה שגיאות איות. שים לב ששמות של אנשים, לאומים ותארים מתחילים באותיות גדולות. אנואר סאדאת היה President והשטחים נכבשו במלחמת ששת הימים. חוצמזה היו עוד כמה דברים קטנים שתיקנתי. מקווה שעזרתי, בהצלחה..

One day after David Ben Gurion declared the establishment of the Jewish state, all the states that surrounded Israel, launched a war against Israel. One of them was Egypt. The war has lasted since that day, although the two states made peace with israel: Jorden and Egypt. Througout the history, the border with Egypt was very unsafe. The problem was that Egypt, like most of the Arab states, disagreed with the establishment of the Jewish state, and tried to do everything to hurt the state in order to destroy it. Two wars, the Yom Kippur War and the Six-Day War, were devastating and caused many casualties. Moreover, some soldiers were captured and brutally tortured. In 1967, during the Six-Day War, Israel occupied some of the Jordanian Territories and a big teritory in Egypt, Sinai, which was an abandoned region. Israel settled the region with people and started to develop the area. Although many people couldn't forget and forgive Egypt for what it had done, on March 26, 1979 a peace agreement was signed by the Israeli Prime Minister, Menahem Begin, and the Egyptian President, Anuar Saadat, who was murdered due to this step. Part of the agreement was that Israel would return Sinai to Egypt. Although the relations between the two states have never been perfect, and there are many people (mainly in Egypt) who oppose this agreement, the peace agreement was an important step in the relations of the Israeli State and the Arab world.​
 
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