בדיקת דיקדוק
רציתי לשאול בקשר לדיקדוק שיש פה במכתב. אני לא בטוחה כל כך אם הוא נכון אז תתקנו אם משהו לא נכון. תודה מראש. Dear friend, Now we are in English class in Brenner High School writing you a letter because X said so. The lesson is very interesting (we are writing this because we know X going to read this letter). In generally everything is all right. As you know (we think so), the both of us live Moshav F on Hadar street. In the morning, we got an invitation to our first meeting as 9th grade students in “Ken F” (It’s the name of the chamber where we doing activities in the Moshav). Because we want you to get know us better we are going to tell you some facts about us: X will be the first one that going to tell you about herself: First, I love to be with friends especially when everybody sit together. Second, I really like the idea of reading books, specially in English. But, the last thing I’m going to tell you about me is the fact of not wake up in the morning on time. Last week I almost got late to the bus because I didn’t look what the time is. That’s all for now about me and now Y is going to you about himself:........... We just want to tell you that learning in Brenner High School is very tiring. At our first day on school we thought that we will be very lonely and we were scared of being the most young students in all school, but our self confidence got higher and higher and now we feel absolutely fine and happy. From the windows of this room we can see lakes, snowy mountains & red trees. In this school there are no fights and if there is you can get a suspension for one day or more. Because X is writing the HW we can’t go on writing this letter. love & kisses,
רציתי לשאול בקשר לדיקדוק שיש פה במכתב. אני לא בטוחה כל כך אם הוא נכון אז תתקנו אם משהו לא נכון. תודה מראש. Dear friend, Now we are in English class in Brenner High School writing you a letter because X said so. The lesson is very interesting (we are writing this because we know X going to read this letter). In generally everything is all right. As you know (we think so), the both of us live Moshav F on Hadar street. In the morning, we got an invitation to our first meeting as 9th grade students in “Ken F” (It’s the name of the chamber where we doing activities in the Moshav). Because we want you to get know us better we are going to tell you some facts about us: X will be the first one that going to tell you about herself: First, I love to be with friends especially when everybody sit together. Second, I really like the idea of reading books, specially in English. But, the last thing I’m going to tell you about me is the fact of not wake up in the morning on time. Last week I almost got late to the bus because I didn’t look what the time is. That’s all for now about me and now Y is going to you about himself:........... We just want to tell you that learning in Brenner High School is very tiring. At our first day on school we thought that we will be very lonely and we were scared of being the most young students in all school, but our self confidence got higher and higher and now we feel absolutely fine and happy. From the windows of this room we can see lakes, snowy mountains & red trees. In this school there are no fights and if there is you can get a suspension for one day or more. Because X is writing the HW we can’t go on writing this letter. love & kisses,
