Test Balloon
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Gloria_Nathan

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אוקיי, הנה פרולוג לפאנפיק ב"ג, יכול להכיל ספויילרים לסוף העונה. אני רק רוצה לראות אם מישהו מתעניין. דירוג: pg-13, זכויות היוצרים: שום דבר לא שלי, חוץ מג´ס! ג´ס הוא שלי ורק שלי! (טוב הוא לא, אבל יום אחד הוא יהיה- עוד תראו! :) (אהה ואם יש פה מישהי שמעוניינת להיות בטאית- אני אוהב אותה לנצח!) Prologue: Rory leaned forward and smiled at her boyfriend; he gave her a quick kiss and continued working. Rory watched him gave Taylor is scramble eggs and trying to be polite. She smiled to herself; she just loved seeing him at work. She acknowledged that for the first time about 5 month ago, as she waited for him to finish his shift. That night, a very busy one, she and Jesse were supposed to go see a movie, but Luke needed his help. She came to Jesse’s ‘house’ at 7pm and as she saw how many customers were there she suggested recheck, but Jesse claimed he’d be done “in five minutes, no more then ten.” So Rory set at the bar and waited. Five to ten minutes turned into 30, and then 45 and the movie already started. Jesse said they’ll have dinner instead, and she kept watching him at work. He either didn’t notice that he was being watched or he just didn’t care. From time to time, usually when he had an annoying client he would send Rory a smile from the end of the room. Jesse finally finished working that night around 23:30. There were no place they could go to, and Rory was starting to get tired. Somehow, Jesse convinced her to go upstairs and as they got there he told Rory to wait in the ‘living room’ and walked into his own room. He waited till her back was to the door and then slowly walked out, trying not to make any noise. He reached her and covered her eyes with one hand. After a quick struggle Rory moved his hand, only to discover a small box in front her. “Happy one-month anniversary” he whispered from behind her and, while his hand went around her waist, kissed her temple. Rory turned around and hugged Jesse tight, she was too happy to even say one word. “Go ahead” Jesse kissed her chick, “open it” he kissed her other chick and gave Rory enough room to pull away without moving his hands from her waist. They weren’t one of those couple who would spend most of their time making out, in fact making out took a small part of their time together, but they still like teaching each other and there was nothing wrong with that. “Oh my…” was all Rory could see as she saw the beautiful angel necklace Jesse gave her. She kissed him and then hugged him in what seemed to be an even tighter hug, if that was possible. “I love you” she said and kissed him again. ~*~ Rory touched her necklace ‘6 month’ she thought ‘I’ve been with this boy… man for nearly 6 month, and I still feel like it’s only the beginning.’ With Dean it was never like this, they did kiss, hugged and cuddle, but for Rory it felt different. Maybe because near the end that all they had- the cuddling stuff, or maybe cause Rory and Jesse had had the time to get to know each other and fall in love before even shearing a first kiss. Or maybe it was just the fact that unlike what Rory and other people had thought and expected- Jesse was very romantic. “Sorry I made you waiting this long” Jesse said and set next to Rory. “It’s okay” Rory replied, “I like watching you work.” “Really?” Jesse raised one eyebrow, something that usually made Rory smile widely “So maybe I should go back…” he started walking, but Rory pulled him back, closer to her then he was before, and she had a huge grin on her face, maybe the biggest Jesse ever saw. “Listen” she placed her hand on his chest “I gotta go see Lane in like 64 seconds but I wanna ask you something.” “Shoot” “Is there a chance that you’re free this weekend?” “Yea, why?” “Nothing just that…” Rory made sure Luke wasn’t near them two and then said, “My mother is going away and I’m having the house all to myself.” Before Jesse could even comprehend that new information Rory was gone, not before giving Jesse a kiss on the chick. אז... תרגישו חופשיים לקטול אותי.
 

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אני רוצה להיות בטאית!

פליז!!! יש לי ניסיון, אני פשוט מאוהבת בשפה האנגלית, ומכיוון שאני לא רואה סיכוי לחזרתו של טריסטן, אני מעודדת את ג´ס ורורי. אם הפיק בכלל על זה....., מה את אומרת?
 
*לוחשת* היא הבטאית הכי טובה שיש!

*מדברת נורמלי* פיק מהמם! חחח... בהתחלה משום מה היה נראה לי שזה דין... כי לא קראתי באופן ספציפי אובגלל שטיילור היה שם... אבל זה היה ברור שזה הוא מהר מאוד.
בקיצקוץ, פיק ממש יפה. קבלי צל"ש!
 

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וואו!

ממש, ממש, ממש יפה!, אהבתי את העובדה שג´ס עובד אצל טיילור....., הוא יהיה כל-כך חמוד עם הסינר עליו!, חחחחח..... הייתה לי רק בעיה אחת עם הפיק - הפריע לי שקראת לו ג´סי. ובאמת, למה קראת לו ג´סי?
 

YaLdoNet 4 EveR

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אני לא יכולה להימנע מסלידתי העמוקה מפאנפיקים באנגלית
אני מאמינה ליתר שהפיק באמת יפה
 
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