I wrote a text in low level because i don't know to continue it ,i need it for tommrow so i wanted that you will help me to improve it,it is very important!! thanks Shavit מצורף קובץ
first of all you cant say "I am been" (line 2) you shold say "i have been" יורדים (line 6) second of all you shold say ...my grades are and in the last line you shold say "...to hear your opinion about it ." I hop I don't have mistakes
