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Life is a Gift .You need to live in the moment and enjoy, because we only live once .It is important to know that anything is possible, and anything can happen .Do all the things you wish to do .Life is real gift, and we need to make use of every moment alive !Do not waste any time on things that are insignificant. So be cool האם הקטע כתוב נכון

I have mistakes

 

[eietmo]

wow, i really have no life. ironic eh?

Life is a Gift .You need to live in the moment and enjoy, because we only live once .It is important to know that anything is possible, THAT anything can happen .Do EVERYTHING you wish to do .Life is real gift, and YOU * need to make use of every moment alive !Do not waste any time on things that are insignificant. (NO SO) be cool * the sentence was correct, but you cannot change who you're speaking to​

 

[zippe]

Maybe Iam wrong.

However, I'd write it differently: Life is a Gift .You need to live the moment and enjoy ; because we live only once .It is important to know that EVERYTHING is possible, THAT EVERYTHING can happen .Do EVERYTHING you wish to do .Life is (A REAL GIFT/ REALLY A GIFT) and YOU * need to make use of every moment WHILE YOU'RE alive !Do not waste any time on things that are insignificant. (NO SO) be cool. I'll be glad to hear comments about the changing, specially If I was wrong.​

 

[eietmo]

um

everything and anything were interchangeable in this case, so you weren't wrong but she wasn' either. you were right, i totally missed the A real gift, but "really a gift" sounds bad. any moment alive was perfectly acceptable.