I finished a booktask for school...

EvyatarB

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I finished a booktask for school...

Well, I finished a booktask about Wayne Rooney's autobiography (I know it's a lame choice, but I remembered I write a booktask a day before it was due, and I was almost finished with this book, so what the heck). I would love to get some opinions about it, and corrections if possible... Oh, and I had to write a diary entry made by Rooney himself, just for anyone who's wondering. It was the 78th minute of the match, we were 3-0 down, but I never gave up. I kept on trying to find an opening. Heading towards the Chelsea penalty are, I was sure I could do it. While trying to get past Chelsea’s right-back, Paulo Ferreira, he dove for a tack, and I went down and stayed down. The impact made my right foot collapse under the pressure. I couldn’t stand up. I was sure I heard something crack. The pain was agonizing. While being carried out of the pitch, the Chelsea crowd, that had given me a difficult time during the match, slowly clapped me off. I was sure it was a terrible injury even before I got to the hospital. I know I might even miss the upcoming World Cup. Finally, I was told the terrible news. My fourth metatarsal was severely fractured, and the third one was chipped. It was even worse than I imagined. It now looked like my World Cup dream has ended before it even begun.​
 

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It was the 78th minute of the match, we were 3-0 down, but I never gave up. I kept on trying to find an opening. Heading towards the Chelsea penalty area, I was sure I could do it. While I TRIED to get past Chelsea’s right-back, Paulo Ferreira, he dove for a tack, and I went down and stayed down. The impact made my right foot collapse under the pressure. I couldn’t stand up. I was sure I heard something crack. The pain was agonizing. While being carried out of the pitch, the Chelsea crowd, that had given me a difficult time during the match, slowly clapped me off. I was sure it was a terrible injury even before I got to the hospital. I know I might even miss the upcoming World Cup. Finally, I was told the terrible news. My fourth metatarsal was severely fractured, and the third one was chipped. It was even worse than I imagined. It now looked like my World Cup dream has ended before it HAS even begun.​
 
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