HI, I NEED SOME HELP

[lee_1]

HI, I NEED SOME HELP

I WOULD LIKE YOU TO HAVE A LOOK ON A PART OF MY CV AND LET ME KNOW IF THERE IS SOMETHING WRONG. Education: 9/1998-6/2004 Nahariya's municipal high school, Full matriculation certificate. Professional Experience: 11/2005-09/2006 "Cal" Credit card Company. I worked as a customer services representative. Self Experience: At the summer of 2000 I participate in youth delegation to a summer camp in Cincinnati called Camp Livingston. Languages: Hebrew – Mother Tongue English – Fluent Respectfully Lee Ben- Ezra

 

[AnnabeI Lee]

HI

"IN the summer of 2000 I participateD in A youth delegation to a summer camp in Cincinnati called Camp Livingston" I am not sure if matriculation already inculded the idea of being complete, and being a certificate, maybe someone else would know. But at any rate you'd want to write "complete" instead of "full" Good Luck

 

[lee_1]

TNX

thank you very much I would like to have another opinion about the matricultion because i'm really not sure about that

 

[lee_1]

anyone? help? please..