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Here are my comments; Profile section: "A well experienced Analytical R&D researcher in the Pharma... " instead of what is stated. Major Achievments: . Developing tirtration methods... [in other words drop the 'a' when using plural!] Accompanied a purchased project... : please replace 'purchased with 'Acquired'. but.. I would use a different phrase: Accompanied an acquired project in the interface between acquisition and first stages of manufacturing. [this is a better form] Responsibilities & .. well motivated to meet deadlines, reporting & updating the team leader of progress, holdups, problems setbacks, prepare progress reports and troubleshooting. Prepare and deliver methodical and professional presentations to.... [please add to whom those presentations are made!]] I have a good reporting.... Please replace with Well qualified to deliver accurate reports complying with GMP rules. Qualifications: BSc ... specialising in Analytical ... [drop the trends bit] Good luck with your job hunt, regards, from London, UK
