hey, how's my english?

[SlurpeeCraver]

hey, how's my english?

hi i just stated my own blog not so long ago and i wanted to get other people opinion about it http://www.club-y.blogspot.com/ how would describe my english? and suggestions what could make this blog better? thank you 4 your time!

 

[AnnabeI Lee]

Your English is good, but

I would suggest to use less "like"

And good luck with the bills!

 

[SlurpeeCraver]

the thing is

i use the word LIKE a lot in hebrew too thats like the wa i talk anyway, thanks 4 looking, i hope youll come in again to read