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Thanking you in anticipation. 1.The novel is about the love story between Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy. Elizabeth she is intelligent young who believe in love marries. Mrs.Bennet wants that her daughters will marries to noblemen. In the party that prepared for Mr.Bingley who passed to Netherfield, bennet family meets with Mr. Bingley and Mr darcy in party who conducted in honor of Mr. bingley. There are difference of opinion between elizabeth and Mr.darcy But in the end Mr. Darcy say to elizbeth that he is love her. Elizabeth and Mr.Darcy marries and jane, elizbeth's sister marry to Mr. Bingley 2.How are you and Mr. Collins? How is your little sun? In my last visit he was so pleasant I and Fitzwilliam are so happiness. Before week ago born to us Anna, our first daughter, she is so sweet and she looks like Jane, my sister. You remember what I said to you when you told me that accept to marry to Mr. Collins? I was thought that you do a terrible mistake and that you will not happy with mr. Collins . In my last visit I saw how you so contented with William and with your sun. I sorry about what I said, it was wrong. Now I am understand that there are problem in our society –woman who doesn't marry stay with no future. So now I can understand your necessity to marry to William, even though you didn't love him. My sister, Jane married to Mr.bingley in happiness. Fitzwilliam and I visits in Netherfield before a month. Fitzwilliam know that he is wrong, he thought that Jane want to merry Mr. bangle just because his money, but ho saw that they love each other. I invite you to us, I hope that you will come. In love- Elizabeth Darcy.​
 
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THANK you in ADVANCE. 1.The novel is about the love story between Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy. Elizabeth IS AN intelligent young FISH who believe in MARRYING FOR love. Mrs.Bennet wants HER DAUGHTERS TO MARRY noblemen. AT the party that IS prepared for Mr.Bingley who MOVED to Netherfield, THE Bennet family meets with Mr. Bingley and Mr Darcy. There are difference of opinion between Elizabeth and Mr.Darcy But in the end Mr. Darcy TELLS Elizbeth that he LOVES her. Elizabeth and Mr.Darcy MARRYand Jane, Elizbeth's sister MARRIES Mr. Bingley 2.How are you and Mr. Collins? How is your little SON? ON my last visit he was so pleasant ME and Fitzwilliam are so HAPPY. A week ago Anna, our first daughter, WAS BORN. She is so sweet and she looks like Jane, my sister. DO you remember what I said to you when you told me that YOU acceptEd Mr. Collins' MARRIAGE PROPOSAL? I THOUGHT that you WERE MAKING a terrible mistake and that you will not happy with Mr.Collins . ON my last visit I saw how you ARE so contented with William and with your SON. I AM sorry about what I said, it was wrong. Now I UNDERSTAND that there are problemS in our society –A woman who doesn't marry IS LEFT with no future. So now I can understand your necessity to MARRY William, even though you didn't love him. My sister, Jane, HAPPILY MARRIED Mr.Bingley. Fitzwilliam and I visitED Netherfield a month AGO. Fitzwilliam knowS that he is wrong, he thought that Jane want to mArry Mr.Bangle just because OF his money, but HE saw that they love each other. I invite you to OYR HOUSE, I hope that you will come. In love- Elizabeth Darcy.​
 
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