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כתבתי סיכום להגשה למורה עכשיו אני לא בטוחה נראה לי שיש לי טעיות אשמח לבדיקה +האם המבנה והתוכן צורת המשפטים שכתבתי נכונה ...אחת מהנקודות של הבדיקה של המורה זה שהסיכום מושך את הקורא האם מה שעשיתי יענה על סעיף זה ואם לא מה אפשר להוסיף/לשנות?תודה רבה לכל העונים. Egyptian Pyramids The Egyptian Pyramids are a mystery that was not deciphered yet. The Pyramids of Egypt are among the largest structures ever built. The pyramids of Egypt were highly considered in the ancient world. There are many questions about the Egyptian Pyramids: who built the pyramids? What is the target of their building? How were built these heavy stones were lifted into place as the pyramids took shape?. Most of the people believe that they were pulled up a huge earth ramp and laid in place layer by layer. but others think that the workers used a wooden crane to lift the heavy stones, therefore that is could be answer with regard to the difficulty on the question how were the heavy stones raised. One known target of building these pyramids is that they function as burial chamber, and the other is that they were used as storeroom to hold the pharaoh's important possessions. Another source believes that the pyramids were also sometimes built for the wives of the pharos (king in Egypt). Some historians believe that the pyramids represented a stairway to heaven or a scared mountain reaching heaven. Others believe it is a religious symbol. The ancient Egyptians believe that raising the human body towards the heavens is quintessential, so everyone can choose his solution to the question of the form of the pyramid. There are still unsolved mysteries that probably will never be answered.
כתבתי סיכום להגשה למורה עכשיו אני לא בטוחה נראה לי שיש לי טעיות אשמח לבדיקה +האם המבנה והתוכן צורת המשפטים שכתבתי נכונה ...אחת מהנקודות של הבדיקה של המורה זה שהסיכום מושך את הקורא האם מה שעשיתי יענה על סעיף זה ואם לא מה אפשר להוסיף/לשנות?תודה רבה לכל העונים. Egyptian Pyramids The Egyptian Pyramids are a mystery that was not deciphered yet. The Pyramids of Egypt are among the largest structures ever built. The pyramids of Egypt were highly considered in the ancient world. There are many questions about the Egyptian Pyramids: who built the pyramids? What is the target of their building? How were built these heavy stones were lifted into place as the pyramids took shape?. Most of the people believe that they were pulled up a huge earth ramp and laid in place layer by layer. but others think that the workers used a wooden crane to lift the heavy stones, therefore that is could be answer with regard to the difficulty on the question how were the heavy stones raised. One known target of building these pyramids is that they function as burial chamber, and the other is that they were used as storeroom to hold the pharaoh's important possessions. Another source believes that the pyramids were also sometimes built for the wives of the pharos (king in Egypt). Some historians believe that the pyramids represented a stairway to heaven or a scared mountain reaching heaven. Others believe it is a religious symbol. The ancient Egyptians believe that raising the human body towards the heavens is quintessential, so everyone can choose his solution to the question of the form of the pyramid. There are still unsolved mysteries that probably will never be answered.