help me!

[יפרח5]

help me!

I'll admit you if you correct my letter: Thanking you in anticipation!! Now, I've been thinking about this all week, and I know what I'm going to do. I am going to call to Denise and tell her exactly what Lynn and Keema said even this can make her feel sad I think that must to be trust between friends. So I called her and told everything. Surprisingly she wasn't offended at all. She doesn't think that friends chosen according to their appearance however they chosen according to their personality. I chose to spend this Friday at Denise's house, and I'm not regret for a moment because I had so much fun and even I heard the party of Lynn and Keema was ridiculous so I didn't lost noting. In Sunday I walked to the yard in the school with Denise and I saw Lynn and Keema in the yard too. They said they don't want to talk with me because I hanging out with Denise. I decided severed my relationship with Keema and Lynn because like Denise said friends don't chosen according to their appearance however they chosen according to their personality.

 

[Olly New York]

I'll Try , I can't promise anything

XDD

Now, I've been thinking about this -for a week- (נשמע לי יותר טוב), and I know what I'm going to do. I am going to call Denise and tell her exactly what Lynn and Keema said ,even -tough it- can make her feel sad I think that -there- must be trust between friends. (פה יש מעבר חד מדיי בין עתיד לעבר , אתה לא יכול להגיד שאתה הולך להתקשר ואז להגיד , התקשרתי , אוליי תעשה רווח של שתי שורות בין הפסקאות?) So I called her and told -her- everything. Surprisingly she wasn't offended at all. She doesn't think that friends -should be- chosen according to their appearance ,instead ,(however לא כ"כ מתאים פה,אוליי instead?) they -should be- chosen according to their personality. (שוב פעם , רווח) I chose to spend this Friday at Denise's house, and I -do- not regret -it- for a moment, because -I've- had so much fun and , -i- even heard the party of Lynn and Keema was ridiculous so I didn't lost noting. (אני יכולה לנסות לכתוב את השורה הזאת מחדש?) -because i've had so much fun , and i've also heard that lynn and keema's party was ridiculous , apperantly , i didn't miss anything- -on- Sunday I -was walking in- the yard -at- school with Denise and I saw Lynn and Keema -there-. They said they -didn't- want to talk -to- me because I -was- hanging out with Denise. I decided -to sever- my relationship with Keema and Lynn because ,like Denise said ,friends -shouldn't be- chosen according to their appearance ,instead they -should be- chosen according to their personality.​

 

[ArieIO5]

BTW

To admit is a completely different form of "להודות", it means to confess. The verb you were looking for is "thank". So admit you made a mistake and thank me for correcting it...​