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Hi have a great holiday!!! i wanted to ask if you can see this doucoment attach and check if its fine gramatcally,paragraph,spelling and etc thanks a lot! i added the file its more arrenge there. Movie review-"Catch the bride The movie "Catch the bride" tells the story of a woman named Magi. Every year Magi founds her boyfriend, they are going out a period of time and decide to get married. When they enter to the church and get to the priest, Magi runs out from her groom. It's happened three times, in all the weddings that have been prepared a long time. After she escapes from three weddings, Magi go out with Bob and they decide to marry. A journalist who has a row in a newspaper writes an article on women's, and gives Magi as an example. He writes over her escape from the 3 weddings and about the despair groom she left. When Magi see this newspaper, she become nervous and decides to speak with the administration of the newspaper. Magi send a letter to the administration in argument that the compost of the journalist of her was false. As a result of her argument, the Journalist is fired. The journalist except a rescue phone that calls him to prove his truth. He travels to the small town of Magi in order to prove his truth writing, and get close to Magi, her family and her left boyfriends. Main while, he become in love with Magi and they are getting marry. In my opinion the film was fantastic and beautiful. The end was unexpected, because the journalist wanted to prove the whole word that he is right, and return his good name and image. But when he search for the prove, he became in love with Magi. It was unrespectable that Magi will finally get marry and won't escape from her groom. I liked the movie because it was interesting to now what will happen in the end and the end unexpected from the reality. In conclusion it was a fantastic plot who concluded 90 minuets of unexpected event. I give 5 star rating to this astounding film.
 

Nelly F

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well...

I can understand everything but there are a lot of spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes. decide which tense you use
 

or1013

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baiscally

i will use the first paragraph(look in the file its more arrange there in the first paragraph i use the present simple tense i did it 2 paragraphs that account the story because its another subject so the tow paragraph present simple the opinion and the recommendation-present simple האם החלוקה לפסקאות נכונה.? תודה רבה על העזרה!!! אור
 

or1013

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Movie review-"Catch the bride" The movie "Catch the bride" tells the story of a woman named Magi. Every year Magi finds a boyfriend and they are going out a period of time .Then they decide to get married. When they enter to the church and get to the alter, Magi runs away on her bridegroom. It's happened three times, in weddings that have been prepared for a long time. After she runs away on three weddings, Magi go out with Bob and they decide to get married. A journalist who has a column in a newspaper writes an article on women's, and gives Magi as an example. He writes about her escape from the 3 weddings and about the groom she left in despair. When Magi see this newspaper, she becomes nervous and decides to speak with the administration of the newspaper. Magi send a letter to the administration in argument that the compost of the journalist of her was false. As a result of her argument, the Journalist is fired. The journalist except a rescue phone that calls him to prove his truth. He travels to the small town where Magi live in order to get closer to Magi, her family and her ditched boyfriend and prove he wrote the truth. Main while, he falls in love with Magi and they get married. In my opinion the movie was fantastic and beautiful. The end was unexpected, because the journalist wanted to prove he is right, and reclaims his reputation, but when he searched for the proof, he feels in love with Magi. It was unrespectable that Magi will finally get marry and won't escape from her groom. I liked the movie because it was interesting to know what will happen in the end and the end unexpected. In conclusion it was a fantastic plot who concluded 90 minuets of unexpected drama. I give 5 star rating to this astounding film.
 

MissUnKnown

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You should change the title of the movie

back to its original English title as there is no movie called Catch The Bride.The movie is accutaly called Runaway Bride.
 
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