כתבתי עוד שיר

RUFF-RYDERS

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כתבתי עוד שיר

כתבתי עוד שיר.........מה אתם חושבים? Tears --------------------------- How does it feel, when they don´t believe anything you say Always, got to show and prove yourself every single day Man this ain´t living, nothing but drama all through the week And if they don´t respect my words, why they want me to speak I´m feeling worse, even though I put my family first I´m shedding tears cause I feel as if I´m headed to the dirt Have you ever told a lie to make the drama stop Watch the world you love turn against you no more family problems How does it feel to be the black sheep, how does it feel to Victimized yourself for one time and evermore after the g And roses on the dresser bad, liquor approaching fast Sitting around, waiting on death to come, watching time pass My life, my life, falls under the wicked and shife I wonder where I got to sleep tonight, nigga tell me how does it feel פזמון: How does it feel, when you can´t make the pain stop Walking in the rain so your tears can blend in with the rain drops When your kin people done turned they back Every family that I know is just like that, my nigga how does it feel I could of sworn I wasn´t the only person on this earth But it seems, that I´ve been one deep ever since the day of my birth I´m sick and tired of being lonely in this crooked land, people think I´m tripping cause of my facial expressions but they don´t understand 17 years old and use to frowning daily, trying to figure out Who was the friend, and who was the foe, you know it´s bout to drive me crazy Mama, tell god I can´t handle the pressure, look at The way they do me down here, my vision is Alex on the stretcher Can´t I breed in peace, won´t y´all leave me alone Like Makavelli I close my eyes and picture home Bout a Mo City block, a place that ain´t no glocks, and it ain´t no sin No longer watching my back for the retaliation How does it feel to wish that you was dead, But I´m so scared, my life, my life, 360 degrees Of being neglected stressing enemies nigga tell me how does it feel פזמון: How does it feel, when you can´t make the pain stop Walking in the rain so your tears can blend in with the rain drops When your kin people done turned they back Every family that I know is just like that, my nigga how does it feel
 
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מזהים ואני רוצה להוסיף עוד כמה מילים... אהבתי במיוחד את השורות: nothing but drama all through the week And if " they don´t respect my words, why they want me to speak" בקיצור,
 
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תראה לא יעזור אתה בישראל עיברית, עיברית תשנן את זה חוץ מזה תתפלא כמה חרוזים טובים יוצאים גם באנגלית אחרי שלומדים לעשות שירים טובים ומתרגלים הרבה
 

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יש לך כישורים אחי,

אבל זה מזכיר יותר מדי את טופאק. ומה הקטע עם הnigga והglocks והretaliation? אני לא חושב שזו המציאות שלך.
 

RUFF-RYDERS

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אחי אים הייתי בישראל תאמין לי אני הייתי כותב שיר בעברית אבל מה לעשות אני לא.......... ו Latent תודה וזה נכון זה באמת לא המציאות שלי אבל פשוט אלו המילים שבאו לי לראש בזמן שכתבתי את השיר
 
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