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MחושגZ

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אני עושה הרצאה באנגלית החלטתי לעשות על טופאק והכנתי כבר משהו עם המורה שלי, תגידו לי איך זה נשמע ואם יש עוד פרטים חשובים להוסיף, ובבקשה כמה מהר שאתם רק יכולים אגב, הרמה של זה: כיתה י', 5 יח"ל מואץ (דוברי אנגלית) זה לא ממש סיכום, זה משפטים וגם מילות מפתח אם יש משהו חשוב, בבקשה תוסיפו לי (כמובן לא יותר מדי, אבל פרטים חשובים שאתם חושבים שצריכים להתווסף): Stage Name: 2Pac Amarue Shakur AKA: Lesane Parish Crooks Born: Jun 16, 1971 in New York, NY Died: Sep 13, 1996 in Las Vegas, NV One of the biggest Rappers that ever were. His mother moved him and his sister around the country for much of their childhood. When he was 17 he moved to Marin City, California. Over the next few years, he lived on the streets and began to get involved with criminals. He was often arrested and sent to jail. It was in the streets when he began his musical career. 2Pac wrote ang sang both positive songs (Keep ya head up, Baby don't cry, Dear Mama, Changes) and aggressive songs (Hit 'em up, Letter to the president, Lost souls). The media has portrayed 2pac as nothing but a Hard Core Gangsta Rapper who wanted to kill everyone but his mama. They blamed him for encourging violence in America (between black people, and between black and white). 2Pac formed a group called Outlawz (The group's members: Hussein Fatal, E.D.I, Kadafi, Kastro, Napoleon, Young Noble, Mussolini, Storm, Komani, Young Ritzy Outlaw). There were gangs battles between Pac's group and another groups in the USA. All of these battles caused the death of a lot of victims from both sides. 2Pac founded a really success label- Death Row. The manager of that label was Suge Knight (which I'll talk more about in the continuance). A lot of famous artists were signed in the label (such as Dr. Dre, Snoop dogg, and many more). Notorious B.I.G- His enemy. At first, they were friends. Later on, they split and created two groups- East and West. After a personal crisis 2Pac considered leaving Death Row, and evan the rap game. On the September's 7th Pac and Suge Knight came back from a wrestling match, and Pac was shot (by 4 Bullets) in Knight's car. There were no eye witnesses (Except Suge Knight, of course) for the shooting of 2Pac. 2Pac was badly hurt, and 6 days later he died from his wounds. The biggest controversy over 2Pac has been the question, whether he is dead or alive. There was no evidence of his death. By the law in USA, the body of a person who dies because of a crime, has to be photographed. 2Pac's body hadn't been. That fact makes people doubt that he is dead. None (Maybe Except Suge Knight) knows what really happend that night. That's, of course, makes his "death" suspicious. Another inersting thing about 2Pac: In many songs he mentioned having a plan to get richer. It's possible this plan was faking his death. The other possible plan was the label "Makaveli Records" he was trying to start. Since the alive theory was known people have looked into his music for references this theory with incredible depth. A few months after 2Pac's "death", BIGI was shot. That fact might make us think that Notorious BIG's gang cause 2Pac's death. Famous Albums: 2Pacalypse Now, Me against the world, All Eyez on me, The 7 day Theory, Until the end of time, Better dayz (New CD). They Keep publishing 2Pac's albums, probably taken from songs he recorded but hadn't been published yet. Famous Songs: 2 live and die in LA, All eyez on me, Hit 'em up, California love (with Dr. Dre), So much pain, Gangsta Team, The good die young, 2 of Amerikaz most wanted (with Snoop Dogg). Also, 2pac wrote some books, and some poetry, that doesn't connected to Rap. תודה רבה, כמובן!
 

בלגאנים

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תוריד את החלק של השירים והאלבומים

הפירוט על החיים שלו ,מה שכתבת, זה אחלה
 

Blood

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המלצה אחת...

תרשום שורה או שתיים על מקייאבלי ה"מקורי", ואיך הוא קשור לטופאק..
 

MחושגZ

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אוקיי

אז לא היו שינויים מהותיים ואני חושב שמיותר למחוק את עניין השירים והאלבומים (גם כך לא בטוח שאשתמש בזה) ועל מקוואלי המקורי אין טעם לכתוב, כיוון שלא דיברתי בטקסט על הסטייג' ניים השני שלו (אחרי ה"מוות"), הזכרתי רק את "מקוואלי רקורדס", ומיותר יהיה אם אפרט על זה... תודה בכל אופן!
 

Blood

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הענין הוא ..

שהזכרת מקאבלי והקשר שלו לטופאק אומנם לא יתנו לך ציון טוב יותר, או ח"ח על אוצר מילים, אבל אולי תצליח לעורר עניין גם אצל אלו שלא יתענינו בטופאק עצמו - ויחס חיובי מכל הכיתה בטח לא יזיק..
 

D gitaL

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אחי רק עכשיו קראתי, שמע...

נראה לי שאתה צריך להזכיר את העובדה שהוא נורה עוד פעם (לא למוות) ושאבא שלו עזב אותם
 

MחושגZ

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Too late...

כבר עשיתי את ההרצאה היה נחמד מאוד...
תודה לכל מי שעזר...
 
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