eliran9080
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hi I need someone to check my composition ... this is part of duary of somome who called Burge there it is : My Dear Diary, Hi, it's me again, Burge. I have to tell you about wicked situation. Yesterday, as usually I slapped my old woman and she said that I am a big rat. I was in shock. I can't believe she said it to me. She is zero, nothing and ugly. I am worth more from this ugly beast. I wanted to slap her more after she said it. How can she tell something like this on me? I am an angel, she is nothing. This is not the whole thing, my diary. Today, in the morning, I went to the drugstore as usual. And sled said to me "Burge, your wife want to kill you! She bought poison rat for you! "I was in shocked, I wanted to cry. I shouted to the God that helps me. I want... (It's hard to me to say it my diary) I wanted to ask her to forgiveness me. It was the first time that I felt in great danger. Believe me I don't laugh my diary.
hi I need someone to check my composition ... this is part of duary of somome who called Burge there it is : My Dear Diary, Hi, it's me again, Burge. I have to tell you about wicked situation. Yesterday, as usually I slapped my old woman and she said that I am a big rat. I was in shock. I can't believe she said it to me. She is zero, nothing and ugly. I am worth more from this ugly beast. I wanted to slap her more after she said it. How can she tell something like this on me? I am an angel, she is nothing. This is not the whole thing, my diary. Today, in the morning, I went to the drugstore as usual. And sled said to me "Burge, your wife want to kill you! She bought poison rat for you! "I was in shocked, I wanted to cry. I shouted to the God that helps me. I want... (It's hard to me to say it my diary) I wanted to ask her to forgiveness me. It was the first time that I felt in great danger. Believe me I don't laugh my diary.