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מכתב באנגלית

othersider

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שלום../images/Emo24.gif מכתב באנגלית

אני אשמח עם מישהו יוכל להעיר/לתקן את המכתב! זה יעזור לי מאוד. תודה מראש :) Dear cousin! How are you? I hope you’re doing well. I just cleaned my room, and I found our last letter. I realized, that I haven’t written to you since June, and long time passed, So I decided to write now. What are you doing in these days? Did you finish writing the book that you told me about? I can’t wait to read it. How was the trip you guys took to Spain? Anyway, I had a great time in the summer vacation. I took a dance class, and I learned some really cool steps! I have to show you, although you are the family dancer… What eles can I tell you? My sister had a birthday last week, and all her friends surprised her with a huge party in our house! It was great! We all miss you very much, and hope to see you soon. See you next summer! Love, Your cousin.
 

LYPD

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כמה תיקונים קטנים:
Dear cousin! How are you? I hope you’re doing well. I've just cleaned up my room, and found our last letter. I realized that I haven’t written to you since June. It has been a long time, So I decided to write now. What are you doing these days? Did you finish writing the book that you had told me about? I can’t wait to read it. How was the trip you guys took to Spain? Anyway, I had a great time in the summer vacation. I took a dance class, and I learned some really cool steps! I have to show you, although you are the family dancer… What eles can I tell you? My sister had a birthday last week, and all her friends surprised her with a huge party in our house! It was great! We all miss you very much, and hope to see you soon. See you next summer! Love, Your cousin.​
נראה לי שאלה הטעויות היחידות.... (maybe not)
 
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