הכנתי עבודת תחילת שנה קטנה והיא דיי משפיעה על הציון,חשבתי שאני אוכל לשלוח באימייל לאחד מהאנשים כאן בפורום שיעבור לי על העבודה ויתקן לי את הטעויות,אשמח לתשובה מהירה כי אני צריך מחר להגיש כבר.תודה מראש
The summer vacation was wonderful for me despite the terrible war in the north. I did many exciting activities During those two months: First of all, I visited the Western Wall in Jerusalem which is a reMAINDER from the time from the time (???) of the Jewish Second Temple. I left a note with A special request as IS the Jewish custom. It was a great trip and I learned a lot about the history of the Jewish nation. Secondly, I went with my friend many times to "Rambam" which is great pool in Givatayim. It was fun to swim together at the pool especially because OF the hot weather DURING the SUMMER days. Finally, I took part IN A national soccer tournament for youth in Tel Aviv. It was great to compete against children from different cities. TO summarIZE, I had a wonderful summer vacation.
