אשמח מאוד, אם תוכלו להעיף מבט

אשמח מאוד, אם תוכלו להעיף מבט

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that makes me feel good and allow me to forget my problems for a long term (or to a ling term, not sure about that one) instead of the books you can say the janer or the type of books, i can read them woithout stopping (or i can't put them away) instead of my life become, you can say that it ass adventure to your life i always have time to read a book if sometimes i am very busy, i hope that the persentage of children reading books in our country will rise. i've tried to help, anyway, dont take me for granted. Adi
 
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That MAKE me feel good and allow me to forget my problems for a WHILE no such word as "janer". You may be thinking of genre woithout=without persentage=percentage you can say that it ass adventure to your life - I think you meant "adds", otherwise it is a very rude sentence Adi - try to spell correctly in your answers, because it is very confusing for people who ask the questions. When you answer, you have a responsibility towards the asker. itse - it would be easier for all of us if you type your piece so that we can correct it properly.
 
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